welcome to 6 sentence sunday! today I'm posting six sentences from my paranormal romance Blood and Betrayal. it will be released in fall of 2012. in this scene, the MC Eamon, an ancient vampire has just made love to his soon to be next companion. she doesn't know he's a vampire.
"Nice isn't it?"
"Very," she breathed, his voice melting her even more. She loved the rich timbre of his voice. It caressed her the same way his hands did.
"You'll like this even more," he whispered the second before he bit into her pink flushed neck.
Her eyes popped open but closed as another orgasm rocked her body.
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well. that would get me attention
ReplyDeleteA little bit repetitious with the language, but a good premise here, and I love the title. Well done.
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Allure
Intriguing six :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm with you about Sam Neill, lol
Niiiiiiiiiice. I'm definitely gonna pick this one up. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteOooh! Scintillating!
ReplyDeleteJust posted my shout-out to you on my blog for my fabulous award!! :)
ReplyDeleteIntriguing snippet. Congrats on your upcoming release!
ReplyDeleteOkay, that's one way to surprise a woman. :)
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