so the really big winner of the first five pages critique is Laura B Diamond! I did that stupid fruit slot machine best 3 out of 4 because she kept winning. anyway, she's the winner of the crit by Super Editor Dorrie O'Brien. Laura, I'll get with you on how to send it it to Dorrie. she has formatting requirements that make things easier for her.
anyway, this caps off my 4 weeks of epic wins!thanks to all my new followers. I'll try to get back into my usual blogging this weekend. probably one of the first things I'm gonna talk about is waiting and oh how I HATE it. anyway, congrats! this was fun and I'll probably do it again soon!!