tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-745630861846503747.post860105216194634272..comments2023-09-07T08:55:50.656-04:00Comments on Adventures of the Cautionary Tale: fighting the fight (scenes)Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17727630549392807909noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-745630861846503747.post-87806000239564281262011-01-13T11:37:32.439-05:002011-01-13T11:37:32.439-05:00Approach a fight scene like this:
As Eddie land...Approach a fight scene like this: <br /><br />As Eddie landed his first punch, his thoughts wandered to a time in his childhood...his mom always added extra sugar to the Kool-aid, making him one of more popular kids on the block during the hot summers.<br /><br />After a few more pages of flashbacks, your ready will forget all about the fight scene.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-745630861846503747.post-27926018508386328962011-01-11T18:14:06.870-05:002011-01-11T18:14:06.870-05:00Can relate to that. Writing in the first person, w...Can relate to that. Writing in the first person, when my character is alone, there's lots of personal thought, description, and I get tired of that too. Much better when I reach pages of description. The remedy is to include many more conversations, change what is happening. :0)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07957545161716269528noreply@blogger.com